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[SMASH!: Knockout QuizShow]

Few things you need to fix

When you play the game a second time the score doesn't reset so in the first frame of the game u should put whateveryourvariableis= 0 Second off when you beat the smythe guy he says he still wins. Third Walk this way is by Run DMC featuring Aerosmith. Good game needs better graphics and maybe an if statment so that if score <= smythescore then go to and play blank else go to and play blank end if. the zooming in and out after every question was pointless cause the score doesn't change unless you got the score to change every question then you shouldn't let it zoom.
Fix those problems and you'll have a decent game. I'm kind of surprised this is rated so high

Smoking-Chimney responds:

thanks very much for that helpful review - one thing tho it definitely was the original Aerosmith "Walk This Way" and not the later released version with Run DMC. Also, how would i go about adding an if statement?
THANKS VERY MUCH IT'S VERY, VERY HELPFUL :)

[Street Carnage]

I need to know how u did tht

im tryin to do tht in a game im makin but i\all i can do is make the car move i cant get it to run over ppl or stuff like tht the hitest keeps screwin up anyways i can prolly find help from flash kit ( great flash could use more backgrounds and better and diff type ppl and missions and stuff like tht)

BIG-Kevlar responds:

Be sure to e-mail me if you want any info or help. I just taught myself how to use flash. Tried different techniques until it worked, so the way i do things probably isnt the best.
Will work on missions sometime in the future, im not the best with my graphics tho.

[race car tutorial]

how do u get to expert mode

nice game type thing it will help a lot of us
but how do u get into expert mode ? PLS TELL ME

karate-clock responds:

ill e-mail you a pic

[American Idol Tribute 2]

yo i got some good ideas for this PLS READ

yo u should make paula jus sit there and smile and wn thy do ask her to give an opinion she goes tehehehehe ur the best cause she always agrees wit the singer
and randy she always be disagreein wit simon and thn in the end simon should go k right wtf do u think ur doin every single person i hate u like and everysingle person i like u hate like wtf and thn randy would go its a colour thing tht would be so funny and whn thy first come show there cars and make them say somtin like man im super rich since these american idoits actually like the show (simon says tht ) tht would be funny too and thn some ppl come outta no where and kick his ass oh and show the line up and show some lady interviewin them and thn one guy would say i thought this was a line up for the new rollr coaster yeah tht the only ideas i got right now but i might make a spoof i dont know yet good movie overall u should make another one wit my ideas

Violet-AIM responds:

Wow, those are some great ideas!! I dunno how I'd pull off the voices for the beginning part you suggested, unless I can get some audio off the tv again. Definitely want Simon to get his ass kicked. The line...that's really funny. If and when I use your ideas, I will surely credit you for them, babyface1.

[Build-A-KrabbyPatty]

im ready im ready im ready

sponge bob rules
grphics- looks jus like a krabby patty lol
but really wht is the secret ingredient cause thy said it wasnt plankton do u know ? lol
sound-i gave this points jus cause i luv sponge bob some much he is the funniest nerd type person ever makin him koo
style:as long as these pant are square and i am sponge this game is original
humour- sponge bob is always funny because hes a sponge wit square pants lol
overall- i have to do the trademarks laugh well here goes ahahahahahahahah ahahahahahaha ahahahahahahah ahahahahahahah 10 for u i have the sponge bob slippys sponge bob calender and sponge bob desktop background and the sponge bob posters and sponge bob rules and so do u

Leoneski responds:

Ha ha, thanks for the review. I'm not sure what the secret ingredient is, I never knew they made an episode on that... -Leoneski